This really rang true for me; it feels like this is eactly how Mary would have acted, hiding what she knows, yet desperate to discover the truth. I love her thoughts about how she can avoid the destiny that's been written for her youngest, and I thought you handled her dual nature of hunter and mother beautifully.
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Date: 2009-07-29 09:03 pm (UTC)Great job!